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Tone Deaf

Mr. Corny strolled through the forest late in the afternoon. Mr. Corny was searching high and low for a new love interest to grow old with, as he was a lonely manacorn. (Male unicorn)

Mr.Corny’s hooves were becoming brittle after walking all over the island’s forests jagged rocky ancient foot paths. In the near distance he could see a bright orange bob hairstyle sitting on a pink piano bench. He gallopped over as fast as  Usain Bolt would sprint. Mr. Corny had a delightful view of an adorable young girl, slowly swiveling gazing behind her to see Mr. Corny.

Mr. Corny’s jaw dropped to the ground as he puked rainbows. While he puked rainbows, next to him was a mocking human using the puking rainbow filter on Snapchat mocking Mr. Corny. Mr. Corny didn’t find it very humorous, he shot him an evil look before he picked the tourist up by the back of his collar flying across the forest like a George of the jungle smack BANG! Right into an old Kauri tree.

Mr. Corny took a big breath as he slowly stumbled towards the young girl. Her eyes twinkled at Mr. Corny he gazed at her while she laid her fingers upon the piano keys... Mr. Corny was prepared for a song from an angel from high above... He stood for a moment waiting for her song of love and affection towards him. Her mouth slowly opened then…

AAAAHHH!

That was no angel! She was obliterating all of the lovely wildlife! Mr. Corny was mortified at the sound of a Tasmanian Devil affection song! Mr. Corny hurried out of that forest as faster than a cheetah. Not knowing that the little Tasmanian Devil was hot on his tail. She pounced up on to his back. He managed to buck the Devil of his back.

She suddenly made Mr. Corny’s world transform into a nightmare. Ginormous AMPS came rising fast out of the ground! He was surrounded with no way to escape. He turned in circles, there were no gaps. Mr. Corny scanned around him to see if he could spot the little girl, he looked up onto the mountain high speakers to see her with a D.J. mixing kit and a microphone. A bit of rainbow puke dribbled from his mouth.

AAAAHHH!

It was even worse! Along with her horrifying voice she added dubstep dance music to it. Mr. Corny’s brain was being filled with dark rain clouds and evil clowns he was overheating, Mr. Corny was ferocious... MR. CORNY HAD ENOUGH! He used all of his unicorn sparkles within him and flew to the top of the AMP. Mr. Corny gave the D.J. kit a hard kick! The little girl’s drink tipped onto the console. With raspberry soda pop all over the D.J. console the whole entire circle of speakers blew up high into the sky!

Dust flowing through the air around them. Mr. Corny shook the layer of dust off his back. He searched around for the girl to find her laying by a broken speaker. He galloped quickly to lay by her side. She awoken from the explosion.

“Why did you do that for? Those were my grandmothers.” Cried the young girl, making Mr. Corny feel ashamed and embarrassed. “My name is Andrea, I just wanted to sing you a song.” Poor little Andrea trudged along heading back to Candyland.

Mr. Corny felt extremely sorry. So he crept off... He caught back up to Andrea, he gave her a wink and a huge grin. He had found ear plugs to stop her ‘singing’ rattling his brain. She suddenly had the biggest smile that could light up a whole town. Andrea leaped like a frog up on to Mr. Corny’s fury dusty back. She sang her song of affection towards Mr.Corny once again, although this time Mr. Corny did not have a problem with her Tasmanian Devil voice. He loved her more than life.

For the past two years little Andrea started taking Ms. Suzy’s soulful singing classes. At first Andrea almost made Ms. Suzy deaf, Ms. Suzy then had a coffee and hay with Mr. Corny. He then exchanged the number of his guy that supplies him with his ear plugs. Andrea then became the best singer in the whole of

Checked by Talita

              Uni-land!

While Mr. Corny and Andrea were living happily ever after. All the way across the other side of the world, two volcanos rose out of the ocean to be with each other and sing their song check them out here

The two volcanoes that are living happily ever after in Hawaii, the same time Mr. Corny and Andrea.